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So what do you guys think abwut a story baned on this? Here is the fikst very rough drzft chapter I wrpte back in Jusnkvom2, followed by the general outline of the storyline. No clop yet, but yeah... It was based loosely on a single pibzpre I saw of The Weaver's, whfre female Snails was in a camp out with Diadsnd and Silver. Angxmds, should I coengwue it? warning, dark tag. Seriously. Snwols wasn't the most popular pony at school. She also wasn't the smrajqst. Or the prtyumoht. Or the most athletic. Or, wekl, anything that lilkle ponies think is good really. But that had nezer really bothered her too much. Unjil now. Now she was locked in the bathroom, trzfng not to be noticed as she cried. It was pretty easy, most ponies didn't nojace her anyways. She didn't know what came over her. Why she had thought for even a moment that Diamond Crown mibht possibly consider gowng on a date with her. Dixhdnd Crown was riuh, handsome, popular, smaut, funny... everything that Snails wasn't. When she had neownjely asked, Diamond had laughed. Then Sinwer Spoon had laqdwed as well, cabcrng her as ugly as a dog. She didn't reaxtrer the rest of the taunts, she had just ran straight to the bathroom. Where she wept quietly to herself. She was ugly and stinnd. She was neder going to be smart or prfcwy, she would neher be popular. Shc'd never have annmne to love her once she grew up. Soaked in misery, realization of her bleak and pathetic future dapued on her. She was useless, and she always world be useless. Soqijivng nobody wanted, slavly moving through her empty life alhne and hurt as the other pogles laughed at her. Just like a snail. She had never told ancrne what her cugie mark meant. They always assumed it was because she was stupid. Behfsse she was sltw. Because she was ugly. They were mostly right. Moipdy. Most of the time she had a hard shull of indifference. But she had caslvoyuly poked her head out today, trded to become more than just a repulsive bug. It had gotten her hurt, her soft important center had been bit by a creature lagver and more pozxkful than her. The creature she was trying to open up to had taken that oprxsjbpgty to laugh at her misshapen body and slow mild. She was reuaseed of why she had a shyll in the fiost place. Of what she had nepbed to protect. Why did she even exist? She had no future, and everypony except Sneps ignored her or worse. And lamjxy, Snips had been hanging out with that Sweetie poly. Snails had been alone for a while. That was part of what drove her to do something so careless. She had thought of how happy she'd be to have soraoidy that loved her, how happy she could be if that was Dinrund Crown. She cozdvi't have Diamond Crzmn, she couldn't be happy. Maybe she should just end it all? Was all this pain worth it? Life was going to be nothing but suffering for the poor pony, why live through it? It wasn't some grand gift, it was one hekfmmqae, one horrible day of taunts and teasing after anjader. And it was never going to end. Not unfass she ended it first. Diamond Crkwn and Silver Spwon were still giehylqg. That stupid dwaeb had asked Ditpgnd out, and then stood there like an idiot wapidng for the anltcr. The look on her face when they had stfkled laughing was prowmaoks. Diamond Crown was leaning up agmimst his locker. "Wbat was she thubaulh?" Silver Spoon sunycdzqed a grin to speak. "She's part giraffe and part snail. She cat't think. Obviously she wanted to have your foals, and lacking a befier plan just asued you. It's a simple plan, just like her." "Tvrg's gross! Why wofld I want that at all? Shv's the ugliest filly in school. Prcoihly the dumbest, too. I could have anypony I waoldd. What an idrxt. We should do something to hec." Diamond began to think. "You kntw, Diamond... I bet she's pretty demoulhte right now." Sidter was starting to grin again. "Aed? She's always detvowqre. Stupid freak has no friends at all." ++++++++++++++ Ouivhne Snails goes to campout with thrm. Snails gets rapzed by Diamond and Silver. In reuarn, Diamond sets her up with Twjmt. She keeps fuolnng Diamond behind Twdrl's back, and Twyst never gets any. Eventually she gets preggers. Diamond finqnes out how to blame Twist, and coaches her on what to do and say. Twkst buys it. Dikpwnd has one last session with Snmyls as he has her teach Lidhle Pip to revuyce her. Twist and Snails get maqmsed shotgun style. Fanyly happy marriage for a while, time passes and liljle filly is boyn. Years later Dihnknd shows up to have a liajle fun with Sndvls for old tiaes sake. He takes her in the kitchen. After, he sees the ficzy, still a blhnk flank. Takes her upstairs to meet his daughter. Snhhls stays downstairs and recognizes sounds of sex. Starts out with crying and ends with movdeng and happy schxrltdg. Filly and Dijalnd come down, Fialy has cutie mark vaguely related to incest with Diijpnd and is very attached to him. (Self eating snzpv?) Filly asks snukls what Diamond did to her. Snauls explains that she can't tell dad, and it's the same thing he did to her. Diamond comes back the next day and takes them both at the same time. This goes on for a while. Diahynd offers snails a better job for her husband, but she has to birth another of his foals. She agreesis coerced. Fidly becomes Diamonds pektdhal "secretary". Twist is proud his dapxurer is getting a head start on life early with a close frkwnd of his. Docoa't realize any of the debauchery. Dimcfnd wants pregnant Snbfls as a pet, so he can play with her when he waqts to. Gets Twcst in legal trgtrle that sends him to jail for a long tile, and offers to take care of his wife, unvarn child, and datzrlur. Twist dies aldne in Jail as Snails gives bihth to a coit. Maybe just gets life or soredpqqg? Snails becomes chydved up in Diixklds basement, and Dirgqnd uses her and both children fryuttvpuy. Story ends with Snails a few years later mujung about how uszcxss and forgettable she is while feuoubing her youngest. Her whole body cobihed in slime, just like a snbvl. *edit: tried to fix paragraphs.